Oh, come on. Its colourful but that's about it. Is it going to be used? I notice that the actual site is quite different from this. Also, if I see one more design using this image of the hooded person jumping...
That's the trouble with stock images, its makes people lazy!
Go design, be original. You've obviously got some talent but I'm sure you can do better. Don't let your head swell with all the ill-considered mutterings of these sycophantic comments. It's their way of trying to keep you back and will stop you really developing. Stop trying to please the masses - be original, controversial and above all – be yourself.
I know this won't be popular but I really do mean it in the best possible way.